Gifts

The gifts of our lives

are fairness and laughter, so

listen well and be

It was during a Seedbed session on writing skills about three or four years ago that I first started working on this haiku (5-7-5-syllable pattern). It’s taken that long to get something which I feel is right for me. What do you think?  Would you change it for you in any way? How would your own haiku go? Tell me, I’m interested.